Framon Designed By Robert Bowling. Made In July 2010
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You and your buddy Frederick are known theives out get as much gold as you can carry. Little do you know that Frederick is killed and it is your duty to give him the respect he deserved.
I didn't finish, but I played for 20 minutes or so. I'm not voting because I didn't finish, but I have a few suggestions.
Overall, for a roleplay-oriented mod, I think the dialogs could be fleshed out a great deal. The opening one with the henchman is decent, but some additional backstory or reflection would give greater emotional significance to the character. The conversation with the village chief is extremely short given its significance. And there's no explanation for why you're released from jail while your partner is executed...just an aside indicating that he had a greater history of criminal behavior than you did.
Some specific comments:
1. I'm not a big fan of running down railroaded paths with repetitive, respawning baddies. Why were there assassins there, anyway? Especially the named one. Maybe this was explained later, I dunno.
2. The arrest near the beginning seemed inconsistent. We don't put up a fight? At least a cutscene? Or some sort of spell is cast that disables us?
3. In the dialog with the village chief guy, it's "bury" not "barry."
4. The exit door in the prison is backwards.
Anyway, kudos for the effort. I'm sure this was the result of a lot of time and effort, and I'm always glad to see new modules released to the vault. I think with some work, this could be a fun one to play. _________________________ My NWN Blog FRW Character Creator
Actually, there are a few bugs, but it can be easily improved and corrected.
SPOILERS!
There are two houses called "town hall" in the map. The first uses the barracks model and is right next to dungeons and the other is all the way up the map, looks like an inn - the inn by the way is one of the houses near the first "town hall". This is a bit confusing and it gets worse because the mines don't look like mines and are not marked as such in the map - also, they are not locked, but I found the "keys to the mines" behind the false inn in the north... and what look like the city's tomb (or something) is actually locked and I couldn't get in because I don't have the keys.
Finally, while I was searching for the mines I found Caladriel and tried to talk to her... the conversation seemed broken but Frederik appeared right there... later, when I had his body parts I tried to talk to her again and asked if she resurrected the dead... and nothing else happened...
I tried to enter the other houses and look around, but there was nothing else to do... game over.
SPOILERS END!!!
I won't vote since I couldn't finish, but I think it can be made into a very nice little mod with just a few adjustments - a short adventure for sure, but there's nothing wrong with that.
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Is this module rogue specific? There is no "class" section. _________________________ Thanks Rolo:)
Posted by RockerMountaiN at 2011-08-17 22:19:53 Voted 9.25 on 08/17/11
Had a few errors, but that was pretty much it. Good map
Posted by RockerMountaiN at 2011-08-17 22:19:48 Voted 9.25 on 08/17/11
Had a few errors, but that was pretty much it. Good map
Posted by DRPEPPER at 2011-08-17 13:20:30 Voted 8.25 on 08/17/11
Map was okay. I liked his idea on 2 different endings.. kinda hard to decide to download becuase of the spam with noobs who join nwnvault anymore :P
Posted by CODSpecopps at 2011-08-16 10:26:37 Voted 8.75 on 08/16/11
PLEASE NOTE THAT LEMO AND TENNYJADEN ARE SPAMMERS. Notice how they were closely created together... Strange :) Most of the coments are B and Up and his discription doesnt even make since to this mod! the module was great with a few dialoge errors, but this guy is here to spam.
Posted by CODSpecopps at 2011-08-16 10:26:26 Voted 8.75 on 08/16/11
PLEASE NOTE THAT LEMO AND TENNYJADEN ARE SPAMMERS. Notice how they were closely created together... Strange :) Most of the coments are B and Up and his discription doesnt even make since to this mod! the module was great with a few dialoge errors, but this guy is here to spam.
Posted by CODSpecopps at 2011-08-16 10:26:17 Voted 8.75 on 08/16/11
PLEASE NOTE THAT LEMO AND TENNYJADEN ARE SPAMMERS. Notice how they were closely created together... Strange :) Most of the coments are B and Up and his discription doesnt even make since to this mod! the module was great with a few dialoge errors, but this guy is here to spam.
Posted by CODSpecopps at 2011-08-16 10:26:08 Voted 8.75 on 08/16/11
PLEASE NOTE THAT LEMO AND TENNYJADEN ARE SPAMMERS. Notice how they were closely created together... Strange :) Most of the coments are B and Up and his discription doesnt even make since to this mod! the module was great with a few dialoge errors, but this guy is here to spam.
Posted by hillendale32 at 2011-08-16 07:14:12 Voted 10.00 on 08/16/11
Just perfect! Highly recomended
Posted by Familyguyluv at 2011-08-15 18:31:37 Voted 9.00 on 08/15/11
Great Mod for a beginner
Posted by hugejug213 at 2011-08-15 17:27:01 Voted 8.00 on 08/15/11
Module was fun. Could fix a few scripts and fix the bug with the girl in tallendor.
I have played the module for more then 15 minutes and have perfect and has no bugging, and sorry if the dialogue is not to your taste. If you could explain where it is bugged, I can try and fix it, but just saying it is bugged after 15 mins of play is just alittle desire for attention :)
Posted by TennyJaden at 2011-08-15 03:42:10 Voted 3.00 on 08/15/11
This module has bad dialogue and is horribly bugged. I stopped playing after 15 minutes.
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