Posted by Rune Solaric (Bear) ( ..xxx.xxx ) at 2004-03-22 16:11:00
Thanks for the comment. The mod this accompanies is out-ish (The Affairs of Wizards Prologue Beta) so the RAD tools download wasn't strictly necessary; sorry for the inconvenience. I'll look through it and see about the other things; reading times are hard for me to gauge because I already know what the text says, so you're probably right, but on practical grounds, making it longer raises the filesize and it's already a bit of a chunk to download on any connection. Again, thanks for the advice and I'll see what I can do about making it better.
Two things. First you have to go to Link to download the RAD video tools (a bit of a pain) and install them in order to view your video.
Second, I'm a reasonably fast reader and found that the scenes changed too fast for me to comfortably read. You probably should add about 3-5 seconds more at each window where text appears.
Finally, it's done okay, but nothing in the text excited me about the upcoming module. If this is your opening, you should probably consider punching it up some more.
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