This is a portrait I made for my character I used in the Erlkazar (pre-CEP) module. However I got too impatient to wait 'till I had finished it to make my character, so I created her, then made a new one when the portrait was done, and named her Shinwa. :) Okay, I redid a lot of the picture on my PC. If anyone has more constructive criticism, please, let me know =)
This obviously isn't the best, but it isn't horrible. It's actually better than the average tries out there. I downloaded it, for reference. _________________________ "A dagger in the night is worth a thousand swords at dawn..."
Posted by Pup_4_Ever at 2005-07-17 23:13:49 Voted 1.00 on 07/17/05
Just have to say something regarding a couple previous comments.
Maybe some people should learn how to be respectful and constructive, before they open their mouths simply to spew out meaningless garbage. I'm glad to see some of you actually tryed to help though :).
Heh...anyway, on a lighter note, as said before, it's a nice portrait, maybe just a little rough around the edges. Regardless, it's certainly better than I could ever do. Keep on with the work and practice, I'm sure we'll see much greater works out of you in no time (I do hope that you will continue making them)! Good luck with everything! :)
Just have to say something regarding a couple previous comments.
Maybe some people should learn how to be respectful and constructive, before they open their mouths simply to spew out meaningless garbage. I'm glad to see some of you actually tryed to help though :).
Heh...anyway, on a lighter note, as said before, it's a nice portrait, maybe just a little rough around the edges. Regardless, it's certainly better than I could ever do. Keep on with the work and practice, I'm sure we'll see much greater works out of you in no time (I do hope that you will continue making them)! Good luck with everything! :)
Posted by napsak at 2004-07-16 05:48:42 Voted 3.75 on 07/16/04
Not all that bad, I gave it a rated under average though. I would recomend using more shadowing for body or using a different color background. Keep working at it.
Posted by ketkallz at 2004-07-07 14:47:20 Voted 1.00 on 07/07/04
Well, at least 16 people were willing to use it. How else can you learn to draw than by trying?
Dark_Queen: maybe you should look at pictures of women, to get a better view of anatomy, or just look at your own face to see how it is . The anatomy is a bit off, and the lack of shadows don't help either.
Practise makes perfect, so don't stop trying.
Posted by Anonymous ( 209.53.xxx.xxx ) at 2004-06-27 03:02:00
not very good at all... I would never use her as my character portrait... learn to draw before trying to make portraits please...
Thankyou swashbuckler! =) But I saw their point, my original post was rather... deformed, but now it's re-done, I do like it a lot more! *and I feel like an idiot for originally forgetting the elf-ears*Up and down rider, And no angel comes down, My heart beats no longer, Only the rain falls on the grave...
Posted by Swashbuckler ( 144.139.xxx.xxx ) at 2004-06-22 04:44:00
Great job! Don't be put down by the swarming masses of idiots out there. It's about time we got some original work on the vault.
Posted by ashyia at 2004-06-18 16:32:32 Voted 4.00 on 06/18/04
Posted by Fuyuko ( 207.62.xxx.xxx ) at 2004-06-18 08:30:00
Some constructive criicism: if she's an elf, she needs elf ears... Also, her forehead is a bit too low. She nees more forehead and less chin. I like her outfit and the red hair is nice. ~F
Posted by VSheep at 2004-06-17 14:32:43 Voted 4.00 on 06/17/04
Posted by Anonymous ( 195.93.xxx.xxx ) at 2004-06-17 11:45:00
did she lose her chin in a battle?
Posted by Anonymous ( 82.36.xxx.xxx ) at 2004-06-17 11:12:00
"No Downloads yet"... there never will be...
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