Hi everyone, This is my first attempt to make a portrait. I drew her using Keyra Nightlie's Pirates of Caribean pic. It IS NOT a photo-manipulation though! And I really did not intend her to look like Keyra, just liked the pose. She is an elf-succubus originally, and her name is Nirrael the Icecharmer, I use this portrait for my character in the game. She could be used as an elf, half elf, or elf-succubus, if you want that. Hope you like her. Comments and constructive just criticism are welcome! P.S: If you're interested you may see my other art works at: http://elfwood.lysator.liu.se/art/n/e/neolla/neolla.html
Now that I look at it, her left (your right) breast is kinda...*strangely* located:P
Posted by Nirrael at 2004-08-2013:38:00
Hi everyone! I'm really happy that you like my portrait! And I really apreciate your criticism. I agree that neck looks quiet weird, but it really supposed to look like it's covered with hair. It could be seen on a big picture of her, which is on my website. As for collarbone... well it's always been my weakest spot in human anatomy. For some reason I never seem to get it right =(. MORE PRACTICE WILL HELP, as I olways say, though my lazyness is my worst enimy, so I usually don't get to do more practice ;P Thanks to everyone for leaving your comment on my portrait! P.S: Please don't mind my spelling and grammar mistakes, I'm Russian and I've emmigrated to Canada just 3 years ago. I'm still learning =)I'm not bad... I'm just a Succubus...
Posted by eb52t at on08/20/04
Hmm..I think it's spelt Keira...but i've never figured out how to say it....beautiful portrait though.Timmy C. Everything is only because you think it is. For indeed, your brain can be interpreting your senses' signals wrong...in which case everything that you think is real, is only a product of your imagination. _________________________ Timmmeahhhhhhhhh!!!!!
Posted by Olivia_Chillia at 05:46:00 Voted10.00
"Collarbone" is the word you are looking for, Phaere...I think.
Posted by Phaere at 2004-08-2004:08:00
Beautiful colouring, the hair is absolutely brilliant. The only thing that is not entirely smooth as the rest: the neck, uuuh chest bone (?) and chest area. It is a bit strange, but overall really nice effects. :)
Posted by Michi at 2004-08-1919:30:00
That is a REALLY nice pic. The neck looks a little wonky (like a toothpick balancing an apple), but that can be easily attributed to the way the hair flows around it, effectively hiding most of the actual neck. Looking forward to more from you! :)