This is a compilation of the old system into a single score. There were 5 that made this score of 7.60 then rounded to 8.
Posted by Marc Derell ( ..xxx.xxx ) at 2002-11-14 12:29:00
Yea but flute and shaku play "together"... change the
second voice, I guess the shaku ... try english horn, maybe
even one octave down or take a bassoon... try it... Of
course it is your work and you call it perfect as far as
you go :)
Marc
Posted by Marc Derell ( ..xxx.xxx ) at 2002-11-13 22:39:00
Be greeted, stranger :)
Allright, here are my comments:
First of all I like your melody but I've some suggestions:
a) I don't like the doubled flute (at 60sec). Why not use
an english horn or oboe or bassoon instead?
b) the harp definetly should be louder. Okay, I am only
listening to a build in speaker which sometimes plays it
not with correct dynamics.
c) the french horn at about 40secs. you should add some
reverb firstly and than make the horn more staccato or let
it not fade out so shortly (depending on what you are
intending). It sounds somewhat choppy.
That's it so far. As stated before it might be my speaker :)
I'll listen to it at home again.
Marc
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