The adventurer has been travelling for days, he hasn't encountered any foes for quite a while, but he knows there is something out there, and is unsure about when it will spring upon him. He is tense and on his guard.
I was travelling on a long car ride and I had thought of an idea, so I pulled out my notebook and wrote this piece, I hope you enjoy it!
Please feel free to make any comments you would like about it, I will not take things too offensively and actually appreciate anything you might have to say about it.
Posted by Dtelm at 2007-01-13 11:56:09 Voted 8.00 on 01/13/07
This ones not bad, and it doesnt have that sound in it! so...thats good....anyway im just going through looking at all your pieces, because i like most of them, i would like to give you feedback you could use on most of them, but im no composer, tho i imagine it would be a fun thing to do... (and alot of work im sure) anyway i think ive looked at all of them now XD _________________________ Her strong enchantments failing,
Her towers of fear in wreck,
Her limbecks dried of poisons
And the knife at her neck,
The Queen of air and darkness
Begins to shrill and cry,
�O young man, O my slayer,
To-morrow you shall die.�
O Queen of air and darkness,
I think �tis truth you say,
And I shall die to-morrow;
But you will die to-day.
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