First off, I apologize for my lack of German. I think you have something very powerful there if you edit it quite a bit.
1. The first 1:20 is all text. Dump it.
2. From 1:20 to 2:00 is more text but more dramatic than the first rolling text. Chop this into bits and put them in between the film scenes.
3. From 2:00 to 4:10 you have a trailer.
Look at professional trailers. They don't flood the watcher with too many details. So although I could not understand the first 1:20, it still came across as too much. Potential players are going to love those stunning areas you show off and stuff like that.
So, in short, you have a brilliant video. It just needs to be shortened and re-edited. If I spoke German I would visit.
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