A Massive crater is all that remains of a once thriving town. Only the most outlying structures remain. A new outpost has been established at the edge to help investigate the strange cave at the bottom of the crater. Do the undead haunt the ruins? What caused an entire town to be whipped clean by the wraith of the gods? Use this 16 x 16 area to tell your story. Note: I've updated this file to make some slight changes.
Thanks Davion, You may not believe this but, I honestly didn't know about the walkmesh cutter. I had seen the little blue lines a few times but, hadn't focus on them. However, now, I am on to it. Little blue lines will now appear in my future products. Good advice. _________________________ The toolset has gotten much better.
Posted by DavionShores at 2006-12-10 23:41:12 Voted 8.75 on 12/10/06
Really interesting area and quite atmospheric. I watched the sun go down over one of the hills and started to feel pretty uneasy about the whole place.
The only problems with this area I can see is the fact that every tree that isn't littering the ground I can walk through, as well as all the torches. I can also walk through the barrels in that tented area in some places. Also, the fire flickering seems to be odd but I can't quite place my finger on why. It just seems to resemble more of a strobe light than flicking fire.
If you fix these small things then you'll have a solid area I think.
10 - A Masterpiece, Genuinely Groundbreaking 9 - Outstanding, a Must Have 8 - Excellent, Recommended to Anyone 7 - Very Good, Deserves a Look 6 - Good, Qualified Recommendation 5 - Fair, Solid yet Unremarkable 4 - Some Merit, Requires Improvements 3 - Poor Execution, Potential Unrealized 2 - Very Little Appeal 1 - Not Recommended to Anyone
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