"It is said that a rather peculiar fellow has taken residence in a quite peaceful little forest clearing. It's a field like any other, but with a sprinkle of 'Umph!' and a dash of "Hngh!". Enter... If you dare. Or don't. Either way is fine, really."
This is a peaceful little hideaway I made. Feel free to use, change, or do whatever else you want to do with it in any way, shape or form.
If you do though, be kind enough to leave a comment and a rating. Cheers!
Thanks for the criticism. ;)
Very helpful. _________________________ "Time spent bitching is time wasted"
~Silver
Posted by DavionShores at 2006-12-15 07:13:40 Voted 5.50 on 12/15/06
I'd suggest fleshing out the surrounding area a bit more, just because it's a bit barren out there from what I can see. Maybe place some rows of those flat tree placeables to make it look like there's more woodland out there.
Also, several trees I can walk through, remember that trees for whatever reason don't come with a walkmesh, so any that you plan on having in a walkable area need to have the Walkmesh Cutter found in Blueprints > Triggers > Empty.
I think if you added a bit more visual touches to this it could be very solid, right now it's kind of plain, thus the rating I'm giving.
Overall it looks like you're coming along in the Toolset, especially since you have a rabbit wandering around and an NPC with tinted clothes, etc. Keep it up :)
10 - A Masterpiece, Genuinely Groundbreaking 9 - Outstanding, a Must Have 8 - Excellent, Recommended to Anyone 7 - Very Good, Deserves a Look 6 - Good, Qualified Recommendation 5 - Fair, Solid yet Unremarkable 4 - Some Merit, Requires Improvements 3 - Poor Execution, Potential Unrealized 2 - Very Little Appeal 1 - Not Recommended to Anyone
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