I am most liking the girl in skimpy dress, and story of mermaid women, but the story was too easy. I must choose between ugly skinny evil woman, or pretty girl with 2 type of chests;):);)! That is not being a very difficult choice bro!
Posted by Blizzardaraaga at on03/31/06
I think im one of the few people around who actualy enjoy water levels in games. People! you need to realize that water levels arent all like the one in ocarina of time! they add a whol layer of depth (hehe) and immersian (or should it be submersion?) that can make up for mistakes. HOwever, mistakes arent to be completly excused simply because of the stting. Please make more underwater mods, the change of pace is welcome.
Posted by swor at on03/31/06
Perhaps I am not the best person to judge this module as I really don't like underwater stuff. But I did like your writing style.
Posted by wms at on03/30/06
Characters were well-written but just a little caricatured (in my opinion.)
Posted by happyfish at on03/30/06
This was really a good module. I don't think it was the best, and I didn't have the most fun playing it. But the writing was great and so was the story. Good luck in the contest!
Posted by sekhar at on03/30/06
The mod is a winning coz the world you created was so cool. I have been thinking forever that NWN should have one underwater module, but you! You did it. The dialogue was sometimes funny, but the story was very non-exciting. I liked the girl tho. The pretty one.
Posted by Dnl_Jms_Frwrd at on03/22/06
I liked this module a lot. The author does an excellent job of telling a fresh and interesting story whilst still making it seem charmingly mythological. As others have pointed out, there are a few minor problems with the way it?s structured and phrased, but none of them were enough to dampen (no pun intended) my enjoyment so they don?t really affect my score.
Posted by rjfnccii at on03/18/06
Hmmm... I am not sure how to rate this. I felt that it was a good writing submission, but I just didn't connect with it. Still, a good effort.
Posted by Arik at on03/15/06
It's extremely refreshing to come across a module this original and well conceived. The characterisation is good, the humour is even better and there's a real sense of timing and flow to the dialogue. The quest construction is also pretty good too - the module doesn't just hand things to you on a plate, you have to work at it. The only problem is that you don't always get the options you want for the path you want to pursue - this is mitigated by limited word count, but it's not a problem I've had with any other modules. I think that it's something I notice demonstrated the extremely high quality of the module though, hence the score.
Posted by Rich at on03/14/06
A damn good play, this. I disagree with the comment that the anachronistic language of some of the characters is a mistake. Slightly self-indulgent maybe but certainly not overly distracting. The character definition is superb throughout and grabs you immediately which, given the constraints of the contest, is precisely what's needed. All in all a tightly plotted, well considered and highly entertaining little module.
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