I thought the premise was well done. *spoiler* The girl certainly had a problem, and the painter was a unique character, as well as the guilt ladened executioner. My only concern is that in some stretches of conversation there weren't many dialogue choices. The author offered a script option for high intelligence in the conversation, but if a player was "dumb", they'd be seeing only one line for a response in a few areas. Otherwise, it was a quick and enjoyable module.
Posted by thegeorge at on02/04/06
Wow, quite surreal (like me). This is the most original entry I've played so far (out of about 100). The writing was strong, the story was interesting, and I can even imagine this as a sidequest. The only complaint I can think of is somewhat of a lack of player roleplaying choices. (I might borrow a shard of an idea from this for one of my future projects.)
Posted by Gilthonym at on02/03/06
Wow. I don't understand how 43 people had downloaded this and not voted. This module blew me away. The story was astonishing. The design and scripting were flawless, and there were no spelling errors, faults or typos in the dialogue. The only possible criticism is that it would probably never fit into a computer game. But it is truly beautiful. Thank you.
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